During the last week we have written a recount of our pizza making. Each day a different group worked with Mrs Paterson describing how we made our pizzas. It was shared writing and we all had turns at writing. You can see our draft and finished story at school.
This is our completed story and who helped with each piece of writing.
Making Pizza:
We put warm water in the breadmaker bowl. Then we put in the flour.
Next we added salt, sugar and oil. Then we put it in the breadmaker.
It whirred and whizzed as it mixed our dough.
(Jamie,Alice,Levi, Emily)
When the dough was ready we took it out of the machine. The dough was gooey and sticky.
Mrs Paterson kneaded the dough and rolled it into balls.
We rolled it into a pizza shape with the happy sticks. It was squishy and sprung back.
(Hannah, Michael, Harry, Jackson)
Plop went the tomato sauce as it landed on the pizza. Next came the mozarella, the tomato,pineapple,ham,salami and mushroom.
We got to try everything. Some of it was delicious. We can't wait until the mozarella is all gooey and our pizzas are ready to munch and crunch for our lunch. YUM!
(Jonty, Ben, Ruby, Emily-Kate)
We could smell the tasty pizza when we came into the room.
We took a big bite and the gooey cheese stretched like bubble gum.
The pizza was DELICIOUS!!!!
(Riley,Eric, Dylan, Ben W)
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