We had such a wonderful time at the swimming sports last night that we decided to write some special cinquain poems.
Sports
really excited
good at floating
pulled Alec in hoola-hoop
shivering
by
Max
Excited
really fun
whirlpool was easy
pulling person in hoola-hoop
proud
by Lachlan
Swimming
really excited
went under water
Emma in big pool
shivering
by Sophie
Swimming
walking races
I was shivery
Parents watching, cheering loudly
good
by Reuben
Excited
Dad watched
head under water
pulling hoola-hoops was fun
happy
by Brayden
Whirlpool
people pushing
I liked everything
cold, itchy from water
excited
by Liam
Swimming
jumped in
didn't like it
heaps of noisy people
sad
by Rileigh
really excited
good at floating
pulled Alec in hoola-hoop
shivering
by
Max
Excited
really fun
whirlpool was easy
pulling person in hoola-hoop
proud
by Lachlan
Swimming
really excited
went under water
Emma in big pool
shivering
by Sophie
Swimming
walking races
I was shivery
Parents watching, cheering loudly
good
by Reuben
Excited
Dad watched
head under water
pulling hoola-hoops was fun
happy
by Brayden
Whirlpool
people pushing
I liked everything
cold, itchy from water
excited
by Liam
Swimming
jumped in
didn't like it
heaps of noisy people
sad
by Rileigh
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